Man held in assault, peeping Tom cases.

Title: Man held in assault, peeping Tom cases
Author: Keith Epps
Date: 10/9/09 (make up for last week)

Summary:
In Townsend Square, a suspect named Arcos-Gonzalez was charged with assault, peeping and indecent exposure. Apparently on August 17th a 15-year-old girl woke up and "found man man over her with his hands covering her mouth." The girl had scratches on her face, a torn shirt, and a throat bruise. A woman apparently reported about the man's car and they found Arcos-Gonzalez that way.

Critique:
This article should have properly been edited and looked at twice because they said "man man" and it made no sense and lost me, as the reader, while reading this article. Also, I don't think that sense they don't know for sure that it was this guy, they probably should have just said that there was a suspect. But I don't know how these things go. Besides the typo, the article was written well, but it really was straight information and most of it was the bare minimum and could have been layed out much better.