BEATINGS

Title: Two more jailed in Spotsy teen beating
Author: Pamela Gould
Date: Friday, September 25, 2009

Summary:
Two teens involved in a Spotsy teen beating recorded on camera are sentenced and jailed. Part of their sentence involves paying 1/9th of a part of the medical bills for the brain damage the victim had taken. A total of nine people were involved in this beating, and according to one of the arrested men, after the first punch which seemed joke-like, everything went out of control.

Critique:
The article put a chart of quotes and what sentence the arrested men were sentenced to, so basically the entire article is summarized in this one chart. Possibly, the person should have just used the chart, or added more information that was not on the chart. The chart seems awkwardly placed, though, and there is no picture pertaining to the article on the front page, and it is the first story on the first page so you would think you would have a picture.