Civil War museum leaving Spostsylvania for the city--by Dan Telvok--November 4, 2009
Summary: Terry Thomann, director of the Civil War museum announced Tuesday, November 3rd that he plans to close the Southpoint I center and open a store in Fredricksburg. Support in the community was not what Thomann expected and so he plans to move his museum to Fredericksburg in a three part process in hopes of better business.
Critique: In the middle of the article, the topic changes from discussion of the Civil War museum to a Confederacy museum and back to plans for the new Civil War museum. Also, in the sixth paragraph, it starts talking about something Vakos said, though the only thing we know about him is that he has a Courthouse Village named after him.
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