Stafford to replace old schools.

Title: Stafford to replace old schools
Author: Jeff Branscome
Date: November 2, 2009

Summary:
Stafford county is going to renovate and expand Ferry Farm elementary and either Falmouth or Grafton Village to make two schools big enough for 950 students and removing one school. The cost of building a new school and leaving these three up would be $21 million, where as the cost of renovating an existing school to this size would be between $6.6 million and $10 million. The school board has yet to decide where to relocate the students during the time of renovation over the next four years, though.

Critique:
The quotes were placed under the paragraph that the quote talks about, so they were all placed well. The language was easy to read and comprehendable. The article wasn't that interesting, but he did a really good job considering all he had to write was something like "three elementary schools renovate over four years."