Naked Stafford man hit by man
Critique
The article is written with too much colloquialism and is too informal with its references to "magic mushrooms" and other slang terms. The article is written with too much emphasis on the supposed personality of the naked boy instead of being objective about the incident.
Sniper asks court to block execution
Critique
The article plays to the sympathy of people depsite the fact that he killed ten people. Notenough emphasis is placed on the severity of his actions. The severity of his crime and the sympathy of his execution should be written in a way that correctly shows them.
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